Let me know what you think about the poem I am submitting for for extra credit. I dont have a title for it yet but I better think of one soon since it's due tomorrow.
I see the world endlessly
Knowing my handsome Terry will always be in society
I know my bounds and abundance limit
I acquire silence but my love withstands it
Through all the down falls in the vicinity, he shows no sympathy
Ambition countinuously fill his paths with successful aftermath
Energy he still has with the courage to make life last
In no way did I feel horrified with the firm grasp of his hand at my side
He has been my hero since the first time I saw his handsome face
Dreadfully as his concluding stages come closer
We resolve the secrets at one time withheld knowing that
His love for me was always clearly spelled
Every moment of our time spent together just makes me think
In my memory he'll live forever
I learned so many lessons and skillful tasks
I have yet numerous questions to skill ask
Never may the time come, where I'm drenched in sorrow
Painstaking situations will decide tomorrow
Once he lay six feet down, a smile will never pass my frown
Black tearful misses will rupture my heart to pieces
Suicidal thoughts become all recent wishes
Your spirit in my heart will never be released
Even though your soul to the world is now deceased
Reality stands through reminiscence , but now ignorance just struck me,
As heaven stands before him, my handsome Terry has just left me!
well... what do you think??
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